“It’s only a monster,” he heard her say. “Don’t be afraid.”

oh Rydia <3

I really like the appearance of the Sylphs! That's a lovely tie-in with canon events, and it adds some nice definition to them doing that.

I also like the relationship they build as the only humans there. And the reactions of the various eidolons to them, Edward and his mortality- really nice work. The Mist Dragon, too- that makes so much sense that she would have that reluctance.