Hee. I love how you worked in references to so many characters from the game. I was so glad when I saw that someone was writing for The Last Remnant -- and rather glad it was AU so I could read it, even though I haven't quiiiite finished the game.

I love how clueless Rush is at the beginning. It's exactly right with his character, even if we'd never have seen this sort of thing happening in the game (although, the bartender in Athlum probably spends his pixellated days dreaming about dragging Rush over the bar...)

And I love how he and David develop. ♥